Sunday, February 27, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday (2)


It's my first official SSS week. Enjoy!

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“Come.” He did not stop as he passed Valence, his face straight, decision made. Gerad met the king at the doors. “Falistar knows where the line between good and evil divides.” He put a hand on the door and glanced back. “He will weigh your heart.”

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Peace and Writing Love,

JWP
Posted by Justin W. Parente at 9:00 AM
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32 comments:

  1. J.C. MartinFebruary 27, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    Welcome officially to SSS! Perhaps next week we'll find out more about who Gerad and Falistar are? :) Love the last line about weighing your heart!

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  2. AngelaFebruary 27, 2011 at 9:39 AM

    Great first SSS!! So happy to have you along!

    xx
    Angela
    http://angelasstone.livejournal.com

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  3. Chrystalla ThomaFebruary 27, 2011 at 10:49 AM

    Nice excerpt! I want to read more.

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  4. CasiFebruary 27, 2011 at 11:27 AM

    Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.

    I love the excerpt. It's very Egyptian feeling with that whole "weight your heart" thing. I can't wait to read more.

    See you next Sunday.

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  5. Laura KayeFebruary 27, 2011 at 11:40 AM

    Welcome! Definitely intrigued!

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  6. Rebecca RoyceFebruary 27, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    Thats a great line. "He will weigh your heart." I love it.

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  7. Sarah GrimmFebruary 27, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Nice six! Especially love the last line. Want to know more.

    ~Sarah

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  8. Sandra SookooFebruary 27, 2011 at 1:04 PM

    Great last line!

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  9. UnknownFebruary 27, 2011 at 1:36 PM

    Nice!

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  10. Cate MastersFebruary 27, 2011 at 1:39 PM

    Intriguing! Makes me wonder how it will weigh out...

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  11. The Scarf PrincessFebruary 27, 2011 at 2:43 PM

    Great first snippet! I look forward to what you post in the future.

    joderjo402 AT gmail DOT com

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  12. Jessica E. SubjectFebruary 27, 2011 at 3:09 PM

    Intriguing! I look forward to reading more. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday!

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  13. Lisa FoxFebruary 27, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    What an excellent little excerpt!

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  14. Lex ValentineFebruary 27, 2011 at 4:14 PM

    Very nice last line!

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  15. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2011 at 4:59 PM

    Great snippet. Welcome to SSS!

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  16. D CarneyFebruary 27, 2011 at 5:09 PM

    Oh dear. This could get...interesting. Welcome to SSS!

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  17. Cathy MFebruary 27, 2011 at 5:09 PM

    Great job on your first snippet.

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  18. LaurelCKrieglerFebruary 27, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    Interesting snippet - looking forward to more next week!

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  19. UnknownFebruary 27, 2011 at 5:20 PM

    I definitely want to know more. Welcome to SSS!

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  20. Taryn KincaidFebruary 27, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. Short, snappy, but definitely packs a punch!

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  21. Lauri J OwenFebruary 27, 2011 at 6:19 PM

    Welcome to SSS! Great first post - and I am def looking forward to reading more!

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  22. TrishFebruary 27, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday--and what a great debut it was.

    Loved the characterization you managed to show in such short sentence. Excellent job.

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  23. Seleste deLaney/Julie PartickaFebruary 27, 2011 at 8:35 PM

    Very nice six. Leaves me curious :)

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  24. Christa PaigeFebruary 27, 2011 at 8:54 PM

    A fellow Tolkien fan, SWEET. Nice six, both intriguing and emotive. I love anything that has a king in it, so I want to read more.

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  25. Emily CaleFebruary 27, 2011 at 11:43 PM

    Welcome to six sentence sunday! Great six. Very intriguing.

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  26. DevinFebruary 28, 2011 at 12:06 AM

    Very interested by the weighing of the heart.

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  27. JoAnne KenrickFebruary 28, 2011 at 8:10 AM

    Welcome to SSS! Nice entrance :) Intriguing snippet. Weigh your heart? I would love to keep reading to find what that means.

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  28. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2011 at 3:03 PM

    Welcome to SSS! Great snippet. I'm intrigued.

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  29. AnonymousMarch 1, 2011 at 2:08 AM

    welcome to SSS! Great to meet another Tolkien fan!

    and enjoyed your six, too!

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  30. M. RekaMarch 3, 2011 at 1:14 PM

    L Loved the last line!
    Short Poems

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  31. Keri FordMarch 6, 2011 at 11:43 AM

    That's awesome! I want to know more about what's going on!

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  32. DEZMONDMarch 10, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    He will weigh your heart - love that sentence! ;)

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