Sunday, February 27, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday (2)


It's my first official SSS week. Enjoy!

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“Come.” He did not stop as he passed Valence, his face straight, decision made. Gerad met the king at the doors. “Falistar knows where the line between good and evil divides.” He put a hand on the door and glanced back. “He will weigh your heart.”

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Peace and Writing Love,

JWP

32 comments:

  1. Welcome officially to SSS! Perhaps next week we'll find out more about who Gerad and Falistar are? :) Love the last line about weighing your heart!

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  2. Great first SSS!! So happy to have you along!

    xx
    Angela
    http://angelasstone.livejournal.com

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  3. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.

    I love the excerpt. It's very Egyptian feeling with that whole "weight your heart" thing. I can't wait to read more.

    See you next Sunday.

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  4. Thats a great line. "He will weigh your heart." I love it.

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  5. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Nice six! Especially love the last line. Want to know more.

    ~Sarah

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  6. Intriguing! Makes me wonder how it will weigh out...

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  7. Great first snippet! I look forward to what you post in the future.

    joderjo402 AT gmail DOT com

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  8. Intriguing! I look forward to reading more. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday!

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  9. What an excellent little excerpt!

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  10. Oh dear. This could get...interesting. Welcome to SSS!

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  11. Great job on your first snippet.

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  12. Interesting snippet - looking forward to more next week!

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  13. I definitely want to know more. Welcome to SSS!

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  14. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. Short, snappy, but definitely packs a punch!

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  15. Welcome to SSS! Great first post - and I am def looking forward to reading more!

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  16. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday--and what a great debut it was.

    Loved the characterization you managed to show in such short sentence. Excellent job.

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  17. Very nice six. Leaves me curious :)

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  18. A fellow Tolkien fan, SWEET. Nice six, both intriguing and emotive. I love anything that has a king in it, so I want to read more.

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  19. Welcome to six sentence sunday! Great six. Very intriguing.

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  20. Very interested by the weighing of the heart.

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  21. Welcome to SSS! Nice entrance :) Intriguing snippet. Weigh your heart? I would love to keep reading to find what that means.

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  22. Welcome to SSS! Great snippet. I'm intrigued.

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  23. welcome to SSS! Great to meet another Tolkien fan!

    and enjoyed your six, too!

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  24. That's awesome! I want to know more about what's going on!

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  25. He will weigh your heart - love that sentence! ;)

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