Thanks for such the warm invites to my first SSS post last week. I hope to hop around to more blogs this period and make some comments. Return to SSS for the entrants.
Here is this week's six:
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A stiletto came down at Falistar and Valence’s knife left his hand. It cut the dust cleanly, but soared through the black apparition.
Valence leapt. The stiletto sunk into Falistar’s neck, the skin bursting like a stretched bed sheet. Blood sprayed through the apparition’s body and it detached. It assumed a gassy form as Valence tried to tackle it, and was gone.
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Peace and Writing Love,
JWP
That was exciting.
ReplyDelete......dhole
Great writing!
ReplyDeleteI love great fight scenes! Great six!
ReplyDeleteSizzle and pop! Great choreography. Vivid fight.
ReplyDeleteYou have great description, and I will never look at my bedsheets again.
ReplyDeleteGreat Six!
Ooh, Taryn had the right word--choreography--it was great. Loved the sheet analogy too.
ReplyDeleteYikes. I knew stilettos were deadly, but I only considered my own ankles. (har har)
ReplyDeleteKidding aside, very vivid six, great job.
Spooky!
ReplyDeleteThe comparison to a stretched bedsheet ... LOVED it
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